For those who were wondering I've decided to put an environmental twist to this. The core message is that the future generations will not be happy with the world they inherit. When Angelica falls down this ambiguous hole, the Father follows. Having been influenced by the protesters, the girl has realised the plight of the future, and so what he finds is a world sculpted by his daughter worries, filled with mysterious machines, monsters, trash and inhabited with unknown danger. And the world above is slowly being sealed off.
While I initially wanted to start the story off with the daughter as the main character, the Father's story may be more interesting in perspective. I only get this idea from reading Phil's comment on the other post, so thanks for that. I do want to keep to the girls story however, since it may make more sense than a more outside perspective like the Father. It keeps more to the Alice in Wonderland vibe when the main character is a little girl.
I'll keep updating this synopsis as time goes on as to perfect what I already have, especially in regards to the presence of the the cement mixer and what it does. My idea is that the girl has a fear for industrial machinery because it makes too much noise, and so it appears in various forms in some locations. They spit this fluid that sucks the life from whatever it touches, leaving it a dull grey.
Gimme da feedback pls and thk u
It's really descriptive and very clear. You might find find that you'll have to incorporate a lot of your imagery into your storyboard and that can take some time. You may find it easier if you keep the action on your characters with their expressions and actions, in which case you don't need to describe it as it should be clear in your storyboard. I think you could have a good balance between environment and character shots. Nice job :)
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