After initial exploration of the story through the usage of storyboards I have a very clear idea of what may occur in this story, which means I may proceed comfortably of the script and its indications. (Should've read this first https://yourscreenplaysucks.wordpress.com/2016/07/14/do-the-big-stuff-first-fix-the-pages-before-the-phrases/#comments) It may have taken a while to fully realise but after much needed consideration of the themes and ideas presented I may have a lucid view of the situation at hand when I consider the potential the future may hold in real time. The main problems were to do with the approach I took when my main characters were the main stigma of these issues, namely richer people. I consider it more of a retribution to issue awareness when I use these characters, which would most probably appeal to some people in retrospect.
Angelica: A bossy young girl, daughter of the enterprising businessman. Her hair, tied in pigtails, lifts up either side of her back like the wings of a fledgling. She acts up on the outside but inside, her emotional investment falls short. When she heard the speech of the protesters she was spurred on to take control of her future, but then she clumsily fell into a cement mixer...?
Father: Lofty, formal, his dismissive attitude toward his daughter is rather detractive of his intention. On a day to day basis, his offspring never sees him at eye-level. Many people dislike him because of past projects that would seem to be in the mere pursuit of money. In reality, he only cares for his daughter, and will stop at nothing to enforce her well-being. He doesn't seem to recognise what the future may hold for them however.
What sort of store does the future hold for Angelica? A gaunt vulture dominates the landscape of tomorrow, for the scraps that humanity has left behind, having fed itself fully... the scavenging beast circles the carcass. It resembles Angelica a little, living off her father's legacy.
Quick sketch of a monstrous cement mixer. I'm having trouble including this because generally mixers are not known for their ability to climb steep mountains. It's likely that its inclusion will be restricted to the first act, although the interior cavern of Hell will be based off the interior structures of a cement mixer and its product.







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